Phantom Punch

8 Responses

  1. Samantha Haws says:

    You’re one hell of a writer. Amazing, amazing range.

  2. ryan says:

    I gave it a 9 because the ending is too bleak.

    • Jon says:

      Perhaps I’ll alter the ending. How about – instead of putting him in his place – his friend’s ghost helps him win the championship belt. Afterward, the two of them can celebrate by nibbling marmalade-slathered scones in a fragrant tulip field. Still too bleak?

    • Lisa K says:

      Taking off points because it’s “too bleak?” Really?

  3. Anonymous says:

    Whoa. Powerful story.

  4. Suburban Legend says:

    I really enjoyed this.

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