The Alley Remained

5 Responses

  1. Anonymous says:

    WOW. You could cut this atmosphere with a knife. Brilliant writing.

  2. Anna says:

    Evil thrives on pain and suffering. It breathes it. It swallows the innocent. This is very, very impressive, chilling, disturbing writing.

  3. Anonymous says:

    Enjoyable, however I believe you’re overusing “then” to describe progression.

  4. Danielle says:

    I look at writing for a living so I’m not impressed easily. Nothing of yours that I’ve read thus far isn’t well above average. Most of it is great. Some of it is truly exceptional. Added to that, your range is a force to be reckoned with. Keep up the pace and the quality and I see big things for you. Good luck.

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